With My Desperation

I chose you with my
Trying to fill the empty spaces
Within my heart.

But all the while
You have been playing along
With tenacious looks.

You should have tried
To tag along.

You could have tried.

You pry your sights
On more interesting


About DCG

Poetry writing emerged in me as a channel to relieve my angst and aggression against life and express my emotions on subtle things. It became my diary for quite a while. Feel free to experience my thoughts. If you do require my feedback, please leave a note on my MESSAGE BOARD below. Thanks.
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6 Responses to With My Desperation

  1. cloxdaabsentee says:

    I dont know what it is about this one that made me smile. I t got me to think of “the grass isnt alwasy greener on the other side”

  2. You have captured well the human experience here, Dennis. Well done.

  3. Poet Laundry says:

    Really like this–a succinct and poignant poem. Nice.

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  5. ashsharma says:

    Very soulful piece. 🙂

  6. Heartbreaking grasping.

    Power piece, Dennis.

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